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This is like, the first story i ever wrote. i dont think its that great, but i posted it for the hell of it.

The Doctor
I walked by and saw a man sitting next to Angie’s room. “Are you here for Angela?” I asked him. He stood and said, “Yes. I am Frank, her fiancé. How is she?” I was heartbroken that I had to tell her own fiancé the news. That’s the one thing I wasn’t thinking about when I decided to be a doctor, and it is the hardest thing of all. “When she was in surgery, they found a complication with her heart. We tried everything, but the only thing we can do now is make her as comfortable as possible. I’m sorry.” “Can I go in and see her now?” he said in a quiet, teary voice. I felt terrible, but it was strange because I had been here for over five years, and this patient had moved me the most. I tried to speak, but I couldn’t because if I did I knew I’d start crying. So I shook my head yes and slowly opened the door. He walked in and held her hand, she was still asleep. I stood outside the door, trying my best to hold back the tears. I could hear Frank starting to cry, and my eyes started to water. I was listening closely to the machine just barely keeping her alive. I heard the beeping go flat and rushed in with the other nurses. Frank just stepped back against the wall, silently crying, watching his love die right in front of him. We tried as hard as we could to keep her alive, but we just couldn’t. She was lying in the bed, and the nurses had left. I was seconds away from crying as I silently walked toward Frank. I said I was sorry with a low quiver in my voice, and slowly walked away crying while looking down at the floor so no one could see me. I sat down two chairs away from the door, waiting for the tears to stop.

The Friend
I was sitting down next to Angie’s door worried about how she was when I saw her doctor walking up to me. “Are you here for Angela?” he said. I stood and said, “Yes. I am Frank, her fiancé. How is she?” I was terrified by what the answer was going to be, and stood there hoping the short pause would go on forever. “When she was in surgery, they found a complication with her heart. We tried everything, but the only thing we can do now is make her as comfortable as possible. I’m sorry.” “Can I go in and see her now?” I said, trying not to break out crying right there. When I walked in I was scared to see her in the hospital bed with her eyes closed. I walked over and held her hand just to make sure there was still a pulse. There was, but I couldn’t help but feel like it was about to stop right now. I stood there wishing she were awake so that I could tell her I loved her one more time. I thought of how long we had been together, and all the fun we had. I was in my own world remembering everything; I didn’t even hear what was going on outside the door, not even the machine keeping her alive as long as possible. I awoke from this world when the doctor and the nurses rushed in. I heard the doctor yell out orders to the nurses trying to keep Angie alive, even though he knew she was going to die either way. I wanted to run out of the room, but I couldn’t move. I stood there and watched as Angie died there on the hospital bed. I felt as though someone was trying to choke me, and I could feel the breath rushing out of my chest. I saw the nurses walk out, and looked down when I started to cry. I heard the doctor say sorry, and then saw one of his tears hit the floor. I just stood there crying, wishing I could have told her I loved her one last time.

The Patient
I was lying in the bed waiting to hear the news from Dr. Cole. I had this small pain in my chest where my heart was. Then I heard Dr. Cole talking right outside the door, then I heard Franks voice. I was glad Frank was here, but I continued to listen to what Dr. Cole was saying. I heard him say, “When she was in surgery, they found a complication with her heart. We tried everything, but the only thing we can do now is make her as comfortable as possible. I’m sorry.” Then I heard the door open. I closed my eyes because after hearing that, I couldn’t bear seeing Frank’s face now. The pain in my chest just kept getting worse, and worse. I tried to remember what had happened before I came here, but I couldn’t remember anything. I felt Frank hold my hand, but I could barely feel it. It was so strange, I couldn’t move anywhere, or even hear anything. The only thing I could feel was the now extreme pain in my chest. Then I saw Frank in a park, he walked up to me and said he loved me. I suddenly felt like all the breath rushed out of me, and I felt as cold as ice. Everything started to fade away and it was silent.

I hoped you liked it.

Why did no one comment on this?

I loved it! You totally need to write more. I feel so bad for the little Frank. =(

Ooh...and maybe the title could be "Lost In Forever". That's a title from a song from a band i did sound for last summer.

Anyway...great great great story.

Oh my gosh, I havent been on here in such a long time! I don't know if I can start this again, cause I tried but i got major writers block.